a Sleek Smartphone Screen Displays the Bold Phrase less Words More Impact While Long Excessive Text Fades into the Background Surrounding the Phone Are Floating Social Media Reaction Icons Including Likes Hearts and Shares Symbolizing Increased Engagement the Design is Modern Minimalistic and Visually Engaging with a Digital Marketing Aesthetic

You’ve put hours into crafting the perfect social media post. You explain everything—your process, your thoughts, your expertise—because that’s what adds value, right?

Wrong.

Meet Sarah, a health coach who was doing exactly that. She poured knowledge into every caption, making sure her audience understood everything about wellness, habits, and lifestyle changes. Her posts were long, packed with insights… and falling flat.

Then she did something radical.

She stopped over-explaining.

Instead of writing 400-word captions, she trimmed them down to punchy one-liners—paired with engaging visuals.

The result? Her engagement skyrocketed by 10x.

Why Less = More on Social Media

Here’s the truth: People don’t scroll through Instagram, TikTok, or X (Twitter) looking for an essay. They’re scrolling for quick dopamine hits—content that either intrigues, entertains, or inspires in seconds.

Long-winded captions? They get skimmed or skipped entirely.

Think about it:

  • Have you ever seen a post so long that you meant to read it later… but never did?
  • Have you ever stopped mid-scroll to read something just because it was short, bold, and impactful?

Your audience does the same.

The Fix: How to Tighten Your Message

Want to boost engagement like Sarah? Try this:

1️⃣ Look at your last post. Read it out loud. If it takes more than 10 seconds to read, it’s too long.
2️⃣ Cut it in half. Identify the one most powerful takeaway and say it in fewer words.
3️⃣ Make it visual. Instead of explaining, show the message through a strong image or video.
4️⃣ Test the impact. Post your new, condensed version and track engagement. More likes? More shares? More comments?

This isn’t just about social media. It applies to emails, pitches, even blog posts (ironic, I know). The clearer and punchier your message, the more people will actually absorb it.

🚀 Challenge: Find a post you’ve written recently. Cut it in half. Then watch what happens.

Practicing What I Preach: I’m not just talking the talk—I’m walking the walk. I took one of my own blog posts and cut it in half to make it sharper, stronger, and more engaging. Check out the original version here.

Now, check out the revamped version!

💬 Have you tried this strategy before? Did it work for you? Drop a comment and let’s talk!

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Dorey Duncan Scott Senior Litigation Paralegal
Hi! I’m Dorey Duncan Scott, a mother of three, wife and fashion entrepreneur. I started my career in fashion back in the early 90’s when I did print, still and runway modeling. I studied Fashion Merchandising, Music Business and Marketing, while also obtaining certificates in such industry-necessary areas such as make-up, styling and runway choreography. In addition, I had work as a spokesmodel for several brands, appearing in print and in person. As a former model, turned senior litigation paralegal, artist manager and on-air personality with a passion for fashion, beauty, and personal development, I bring a unique combination of style, strategic thinking, and legal expertise to my work. My years navigating the legal world have sharpened my attention to detail, while my experience and passion for fashion, beauty, and personal development drives my desire to help others feel empowered and help them in their journey toward self-empowerment. My experience in the fashion world has taught me the power of confidence. 

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